Comments for Mr. Verbeck's 07-08 Class Writing Page http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com Thu, 22 May 2008 19:37:43 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Why we go to school; By Colin by abilan08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/09/26/why-we-go-to-school-by-colin/#comment-165 abilan08 Thu, 22 May 2008 19:37:43 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/09/26/why-we-go-to-school-by-colin/#comment-165 The way you wrote it was really unique, good job! The way you wrote it was really unique, good job!

]]> Comment on Tony Hawk Going Pro; by Brendan by abilan08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/05/22/tony-hawk-going-pro-by-brendan/#comment-164 abilan08 Thu, 22 May 2008 19:34:35 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=162#comment-164 That was really good! I never knew Tony Hawk was professional by the time he was 12! That was really good! I never knew Tony Hawk was professional by the time he was 12!

]]> Comment on Why do we go to School; by Peter by petsti08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/09/26/why-do-we-go-to-school/#comment-161 petsti08 Wed, 21 May 2008 19:30:35 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/09/26/why-do-we-go-to-school/#comment-161 Thank you Theresa Thank you Theresa

]]> Comment on Ugly Betty;by Michaella by carrog08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/04/03/ugly-bettyby-michaella/#comment-155 carrog08 Mon, 14 Apr 2008 13:51:46 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=128#comment-155 I loved the saying it spilled ou like a buckle of marble tip over I loved the saying it spilled ou like a buckle of marble tip over

]]> Comment on Simpson Wars; by Daniel by carrog08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/04/07/simpson-wars-by-daniel/#comment-154 carrog08 Mon, 14 Apr 2008 13:47:44 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=126#comment-154 C.B.C is really cool how he is evil! It is really good! C.B.C is really cool how he is evil! It is really good!

]]> Comment on Camping on the Beach; by Carolyn Rogers by Dad http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/11/09/campping-on-the-beach-by-carolyn-rogers/#comment-135 Dad Tue, 01 Apr 2008 22:09:30 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/11/09/campping-on-the-beach-by-carolyn-rogers/#comment-135 Cool story! I can't wait till next time Cool story! I can’t wait till next time

]]> Comment on Candy all Over the World; by Carolyn by Moe http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/02/08/candy-all-over-the-world-by-carolyn/#comment-134 Moe Tue, 01 Apr 2008 22:03:00 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=93#comment-134 Hey Carolyn, It sounds like you had a lot of fun writing this piece. I hope you get to travel the world and try all the candy you want. Love, Mom Hey Carolyn,

It sounds like you had a lot of fun writing this piece. I hope you get to travel the world and try all the candy you want.
Love, Mom

]]> Comment on Camping on the Beach; by Carolyn Rogers by mom http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/11/09/campping-on-the-beach-by-carolyn-rogers/#comment-133 mom Tue, 01 Apr 2008 21:36:24 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2007/11/09/campping-on-the-beach-by-carolyn-rogers/#comment-133 Hey Carolyn, Ilove your story. I ca't wait till this summer. We'll explore and have a lot to write about, all my love, love you more than all the water in the oceans MOM XXOO Hey Carolyn,
Ilove your story. I ca’t wait till this summer. We’ll explore and have a lot to write about,
all my love,
love you more than all the water in the oceans
MOM XXOO

]]> Comment on Candy all Over the World; by Carolyn by Carolyn http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/02/08/candy-all-over-the-world-by-carolyn/#comment-129 Carolyn Sat, 08 Mar 2008 15:26:12 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=93#comment-129 I love it! It is so cool I love it! It is so cool

]]> Comment on Chocolate;by Holly by kelroy08 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/2008/02/08/chocolateby-holly/#comment-128 kelroy08 Sun, 02 Mar 2008 13:19:01 +0000 http://mrverbeck08.wordpress.com/?p=106#comment-128 Holly, Even though I was there helping you when you were typing your feature article I wanted to see how the story got better and as I was reading your story I realized that you made your story alot better.Your story at the beginning was letting the reader go and now it is pulling the reader in. -Kelly Holly,

Even though I was there helping you when you were typing your feature article I wanted to see how the story got better and as I was reading your story I realized that you made your story alot better.Your story at the beginning was letting the reader go and now it is pulling the reader in.

-Kelly

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