I looked up from my chair and the taste of the salty air took over. I saw the calm blue ocean and a boat in the distance. The boat was a mile out, but I could still hear the fog horn. I looked away and looked back and the boat was gone . The seagulls were talking. As the seagulls talked the leader was coming towards me.
“Should I feed it,”? I thought to myself.
I threw a part of my bagel, now all of the seagulls were coming towards me. My dog Maggie came and scared them away. She came so fast that she scared me too and I feel back in my chair. When I sat back up and something caught my eye.
A swarm of blue fish!!!! Now seagulls were coming from left and right, and follow them into the ocean. I stuck my feet in the sand and it felt like a pile of silk going between my toes. I felt something hard the next thing I know I stub my foot on a rock. A shock went throw my body.
Now the moring fog rolled in and then I knew that was a nice camping morning.
November 9, 2007 at 12:38 pm |
I really like your story! I especially like how you said something caught my eye and in the next paragraph you said A swarm of blue fish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
April 1, 2008 at 9:36 pm |
Hey Carolyn,
Ilove your story. I ca’t wait till this summer. We’ll explore and have a lot to write about,
all my love,
love you more than all the water in the oceans
MOM XXOO
April 1, 2008 at 10:09 pm |
Cool story! I can’t wait till next time