The rumbling of something grew louder and louder as time flew through the night. It was spooky because it was sunset on Halloween. I looked. A car was coming. I thought to myself everyone is going to die on Halloween. I was pretty sure my friends and my little sister are going to get run over and be real ghosts. I smell the fumes of the car and they were like a big explosion .It felt like my heart stopped and everything else, too. I fainted from all the terror. I awoke expecting to see ran over kids. I saw nothing , well to be exact nothing was there. My friends asked me if I was felling ok I said ,” Yeah I’m ok.”
Then I realized that they were run over by the car. I turned around excepting to see ghosts and saw my friends and my little sister staring at me .
I screamed ,” I thought you got run over by the car and were ghosts.” They said ,” We almost did, the car went past us by inches. Then for the rest of the party we never spoke about it again. That was the day”One of My Little Kid Fears” happened. The same night as Halloween.
November 8, 2007 at 10:25 pm |
This is really great! You used very good detail!
November 9, 2007 at 12:24 am |
Kelly,
I lided they way you said what you expected to see, even though you didn’t see it! That sounded pretty scary and enough to make you faint! That is all I can say for now!
-Michaella
February 26, 2008 at 11:24 pm |
Nice job Kelly!!! Keep on imagining!!!